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A Trip To ZhongShan Park


宝安外国语学校五年四班 江南

  I think Linzexu is very great! He is my example!
          A Trip To ZhongShan Park  
    Yesterday,my family and I went to ZhongShan Park. It was great! I saw many trees and flowers. The trees were green and strong. I can climbed it. The flowers were red and small. They were beautiful,too. Do you think so? Then we went to the river.The river is big clean and blue. Suddenly, I felt everything is colourful and beautiful. Maybe it was cause of the river. I felt ererything is lovely, too. We rode boats. First, I felt afraid. Then, I sat in the boat. We can pick balloons. I think it was fun, too. And we were happy. After thirty minutes. We went to the bank. At last, we walked and took a lot of photos. We saw Linzexu. He is strong and he is handsome.I took photos in front of him. It was beautiful. I think Linzexu is very great! He is my example! Then, the sky was getting dark. And wo took car and went home. It was a lovely and great trip! Isn't it?

 
 
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