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My mother


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  I will study hard and be a great people.
  My mother is 36 years old.She is a businessman.She is very busy every day.She gets up eary and cooks the breakfast for my household.Then she goes to work at 7:30.Goes home at 12:00 in the noon.In the afternoon , she does not go to the shopping mall and bookshop.My mother ofter buys the useful books for me. Because she hopes me earnest learn .A lot of time my mother is doing the housework. She can make very delicious supper.She ofter say;"I can make delicious food for my dear daughter.''  
  What a good mother! I will say to my mother:"Thank you,dear good mother! I will study hard and de a great people.''

 
 
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