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My birdie


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    Oneday, I found a birdie on the street. I took it home.  
  It had got many feathers but it couldn’t fly well. I put it on a litter tr-ee in the balcony.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  I give it food and water everyday. Everymorning the birdie sing and sing. I like it and it like me too.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  Day after day, the birdie grows big. This morning, I put it on my hands and say: “Fly away! You can fly into the nature.” The birdie flies up. It flies into the sky. It flies far away.  
  I think, the birdie may be happier now.
 
 

 
 
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