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One Day


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  这是我的英语日记,给我一些建议!! I am very happy!!
Saturday,July,fourth,  
    It was sunny and cool today,I went to the zoo with my friend Lucy.There were many animals in the zoo.We saw the lions   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
first.Because Lucy liked them very.But I didn't like them.They were dangerous.Then ,we saw the pandas,tigers,birds,eleplents,   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
koalas……  
    At noon,I ate lunch in the hotel.The food were very delicious.I liked it.  
    In the afternoon,I played tennis with my parents.It was interesting.Then,we went shopping.It was crowded.But I liked it.  
   
   
   
   
Sunday,July,fifth  
    It was snowy today.I went to the mnseum.It was kind of boring.Then ,I stayed at the hotel ,I watched TV.  
    In the afternoon,I made a snowman.I was happy!  
    Today ,I was not very interesting.  

 
 
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