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My holiday


北京 XQ1996

  It first cames form the Qin Dynasty
  Today day was a fantastic day ! My mother and my father with me went to Great Wall. We can not believe that it only took us an hour to get here . The Great Wall is the name for a wall. It first cames form the Qin Dynasty. We visited many famous , it was amazing. There were many thing to see there but my favorite of all was the souvenirs in Great Wall.We had a picnic in Great Wall and we had a good time!

 
 
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