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My happy day


棉花小学6年级 1119145488

  It's a sunny day,the bird is singing
  Today I'm very happy,after I have breakfast,I go to park.  
  It's a sunny day ,the bird is singing,I'm singing too.When I get to park,I see some girls are playing games ,so I join them.We play very happy.Then I have lunch with my friends.We both have a good time.what's a happy day!

 
 
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