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    Look at the mirror, there is a girl in it. She has short hair, big eyes and a long face. She is now studying in MinAn Middle School. Her favorite subject is history, because she thinks history is very interesting. She was born in 1996-4-14. So she is going to be 14 years old.  
    She has many hobbies, such as: playing ping-pong, playing computer games, collecting things, playing chess and so on. She can play basketball., but she can’t play it very well. Oh! Who can help her with basketball!   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
    Do you know what's her favorite animal?Don’t know? Let me tell you!Hu-Hu!She doesn’t like any animals.Because she thinks animals are very fearful! Oh! Is the girl as timid as a mouse?   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
    Now do you know who she is? Xi-Xi! That’s me! I am in Class One, Grade One! If you want to make friends with me.     You can write letter to me. My E-mail address is:jss.4.14@163.com.. Welcome to make friends with me!Anticipate your letter!  

 
 
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