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my father


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  my father is a businessman. his birthday is the third of september and now he is 50 years old. He likes listening to the music and playing golf, because he thinks that these two things can relax himself. My father is very busy, so he can't take care of me very often. However, he always talk to me by phone. i miss my father very much.

 
 
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