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My summer holiday


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  I was very happuy.
  My summer holiday  
  last summer holiday Iwas busy.First,I went to Hainan.I sawm in the sea and played volleyball on the beach.That was exciting.Next,Iwent to Beijin   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  g.I climbedthe Great Wall.That was tiring but beatiful.After that,Iread some books.They were long.It was interesting.

 
 
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