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My best friend


息县杨店乡 忧梦儿

  L hope you give me some marking.
  I have many friends,but she is my best friend.She is cute and clever.  
  She has big eyes,but them with glasses.She has long eyelash .Her nose is big,it is not ugly,but it is not beautiful,too.And her mouth is wide.She also has short black hair,it is thick.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  She is also a happy girl.She is happy everyday.Even if teacher blames her,She also happies,does not angry.She is a good child.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  Do you know her?Who is she?Oh,she is me.

 
 
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