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My summer vacation


荆州 王雨婷荆州

  My summer vacation was fantastic!
  My summer vacation was fantastic! I went to swimming and went to fishing. We play tennis erey day. We had a picnic and ate chocolate. one day, we visited a museum.  
  In summer vacation, my faorite day is July 11th.It is my birthday! We had birthday party. My friends always give me presends.Sometimes we dress up in costumes.I always have a big birthday cake.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  I never goto bed erly.

 
 
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