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My favourite animal


6年级2班 李嘉琪

  They are very cute. There are many kinds of dogs.
  My favourite animal is dog. They are very cute. There are many kinds of dogs. Some of them are big and some of them are small, some of them are white and some of them are black. I like the big dogs, like a bulldog, because they can protect me. I don't have anydog yet, because my mum does not like dogs. she think they are dangrous. I Will buy a dog after I become older.I like dog very happy.

 
 
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