小学生作文:经验谈阅读指导

yesterdany


第一小学 936270149

  第一次写,如果写的不好,请见谅。
  yesterdany was my friend Lili birthday. I bought a dog for her. It was beautiful and pretty. zhanghong liuxie lixiao and I weng to her birthday party .She was very happy. Us too. After supper, we went to local park. We played there.Later on I had a stomachache, but I was getting better. at nine, we were go home. Yesterday we are very happy. It was a good day!

 
 
位置:发表区   年级:小学6 关键字英语
来源: 字数:293 投稿日期:2008-8-27 13:02:00 点击:
  蜜蜂 点评
推荐3星:[蜜蜂]2008-8-27 13:09:58
 网友打分:(综合分:)
 欢迎你投下宝贵一票(不能更改,入门级不能打分,选择收藏将进入我的珍藏)。
+2收藏 精品
+1还行 发表
-1真糟 退稿
   发表评论 
到百度搜索“yesterdany”