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My name is Tom,I'm 13 years old.I have a brother and a sister.I want to be a teather.I think I am very gook-looking.I have straight black hair. I'm of medium build and medium height.I like playing computer games.What about you? Thanks for looking at.
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(枫飘雪舞 广东省廉江市吉水镇吉水中学七（三）班)