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My Hobby


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  I have many hobbies.But I like watch television best.It is a kaleidoscope.It can our life rich.In the morning,we can watch the news.In the noon,we can watch the sports programme.In the evening,we can watch the TV play.At night,childen can watch the cartoon.But the TV can our eyes were hurt.I like watch television very much.What is your hobby?

 
 
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