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My Saturday


安阳一中学校1年级六班 孤独恶魔

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  On Saturday, I usually get up at around 08:00. I eat blackfish at 08:10. Then I do my homework. At about 10:00. I play computer at 12:00. I have lunch at 12:30. After lunch I listen to music. Then at 13:30 I do my homework. I eat dinner at 17:30. Then I watch TV at 16:00.I usually go to bed at around at 21:00.  

 
 
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