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my favourite season


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  Summer is a nice season.
  There is four seasons for a year.My favourite season is summer .  
  The weather is hot in summer.The Sun shines brithly.It often rains.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  In the summer, we can do many things.We can go to the beach and swim in the sea.It is nice to eat ice cream in a hot weather.In summer, blow air conditioning is also comefortable.  
  Summer is a nice season.I always have a good time in the summer…………。。 ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………。 ……… ………。                         
 
 
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