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The garden


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  哈哈,我第一次写作,多多照顾啊
      The garden  
 Today is Sunday,it's sunny. This is a beautiful garden .Some children are playing in the garden.They are very happy.You can see some trees ,some beautiful flowers and some birds.There are some boys and girls.They are playing games and theyare very happy!  

 
 
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