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My good friend(英文的)


东莞桥头镇第四小学校6年级1班 四小李玉梅

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 Hi.My name is Li Yu Mei.I have two friends.They are Lai Cai Na and Li Hui Xian. Lai Cai Na is 13 years old.Li Hui Xian is 12years old .Li Hui Xian is 1 year younger than Lai Cai Na .Lai Cai Na is 148 cm .She is 4cm taller than Li Hui Xian is Li Hui Xian.Li Hui Xian is very thin .She is 36 kg.Lai Cai Na likedo sport.She is 40kg.She is biggei and stronger than Li Hui Xian .Ha Ha .They are my good friends.

 
 
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