小学生作文:议论文阅读指导

My friend


邯郸 123美好

  写的不好,还望多多指教
            My Friend  
    小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
    Lu Hang is my best friend.She is a girl.She is very beautiful and very lovable.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
   
    She has big eyes and small nose and mouth and sooty hair.She is tall.She stud is good.  
      
   She like listen popular song and also classical music.She has one dream is which is to be a teacher.  
   
   This is my friend, a beautiful girl.I highly value the friendship with her.  

 
 
位置:发表区   年级:小学6 关键字,英语
来源: 字数:288 投稿日期:2007-11-25 11:18:00 点击:
  凝梦冰澜 点评
推荐发表:[凝梦冰澜]2008-1-13 13:48:59
 网友打分:(综合分:)
 欢迎你投下宝贵一票(不能更改,入门级不能打分,选择收藏将进入我的珍藏)。
+2收藏 精品
+1还行 发表
-1真糟 退稿
   发表评论 
 同题作文:  到百度搜索“Myfriend”
  • Myfriend 135字 (勇敢 育人学校602年级)