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My hometome


滨海县第3学 林佳怡

  I think it is a wondreful place to live.
Hello, my name is Linjiayi. I am going to show you around my home town. First,here is my house. I live in a small house. We have a garden. Outside the garden is a park. It takes about thirty minutes to get to the nearwst town. There is not much pollution in the town because cars cannot go into the centre of town. I have lots of friends here. I think it is a wondreful place to live. I hope you can come and visit soon!  

 
 
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