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My New Home


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  This my new home.Do you like my new home?
                         My New Home  
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      This my new home.There is a big living room a dining room, three bathrooms, four bedrooms.My bedroom is nice very much.Look! There have a desk two chairs a bed and five toy .Have cat dog bear…  
     My new home ouside are two big and  nice  garden.The  garden   have   many   big  and  tall   and  gree trees.have  many  beatiful  fowlers .  
    
    My new home near is a playground.My brother and  my  father  is  exerside  offten.  
    I like my new  home.Do you like?
 
 
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