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My father


杨浦区凯慧中学初一(4)班 徐懿森

  My dad really tough.
   My father is a very serious person, when his wrath is like a leopard.  
  Not today I put him into angry, today is Sunday I thought play the computer should not be this morning, I play at seven o 'clock, my father, he didn't ask my homework, I said no.Dad suddenly angry like a leopard, angry of say to me, didn't finish his work is to play computer.My father said.I hurried to go to do my homework, dad beside supervision and I, my father know that I write is bad, when I was doing my homework, he said words to write a little bit better, not tore up his book to redo, I had to a row of time.I did at nine o 'clock, homework finished, dad also said the homework.My dad really tough.
 
 
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