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My best friend


新港小学 邱如意751

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  I have a best friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has short black hair, she has small eyes, she has a small mouth. she's tall and a little fat. she's very friendly.  
  Her favourite food is milk,because they're very tasty. her favourite colour is bule. her favourite season is summer, because she can swim. she likes riding a bike and swimming.  
  Who's she? she is my classmate, jilinli.  
  
 
 
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