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Our new housing estate


七年级 徐懿森

  I live in a good place.Do youwant to see?
   My family used to live in a small flat.The surroundings are too bad.There was no swimming pool,no children's playground,no green area and so on.People throw garbage everywhere,environment smelly.The environment can not bad? Who is willing to live in a place like?  
  Last year,we went to live in a new house.We have a nice housing estate.The surroundings are nicer than before.There are a lot of flowers and green grass, there are a lot of small garden. Center and a lake. In our apartment, there is a winding stream.There are swimming pool and children's paradise. It is heaven.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  Travel is very convenient. There is light rail station, station and there are some shops and a big shopping centre.I love this piece of feng shui treasure-house.  
  I live in a good place.Do youwant to see?  
  
 
 
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