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My good fyiend


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  My fyiend is Huang Jian.
  My fyiend is Huang Jian.She tall and fun .Watching TV and eatting is her hobby.I like watching TV,too,but I don't like eatting,either.She's motheris a nurse.She works is in hospital,she like buy some clothes for Huang Jian.Huang Jian has a long hard ,it's biack.Do you have a good friend?Can you tell me somethings about they:what aye they hobby?  

 
 
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