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My day


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  Today is winter vacation's day.I get up at 7:30 in morning.I have breakfast at about 8:00.I read English at 9:00.10:00,my uncle go shopping with me.My family have lunch with me at 12:15.I siesta at 1:30,afterward I go to sport at4:50.I go home at5:50.I do my homeworke at 6:00.I have super at 6:50.7:00,I wach TV with my parent.9:00,is't time to go to bed.  
  I'm happy today!

 
 
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