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On the Train


第三十四中学七年四班 柳叶

  I like train. And I feel happily. I think, the train feels happily too!
On the train, I can see some goats. What are they doing? They are eating grass. Look! There are many brown cows. What are they doing? They are eating grass too. Look! That is a big mountain. And I can see a hill near that big mountain. They look like a mother and a baby . Listen ! It’s a song :“…….” Who is singing a song? Oh! The woman behind me is singing.“Snoooore ! Whoooo!......” Oh! It’s loud .What is he doing ? He is sleeping .  
   I like train. And I feel happily.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
   I think , the train feels  happily too!   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn

 
 
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