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             My family  
      I have a sweet and happy family . There are four people in my family , they are my father , mother , and I . My father is a businessman . He has much work to do . He works very late every day . But as soon as he has th time , he will go shopping with my mother , brother and me r watch TV and chat with us .   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
   My mother is a god woman . She works hard , too . She doesn't like doing housework , but she keeps pur home tidy . Every day when I get home form school , she has delicious food ready for me to eat . My mother likes the house to look clean . If my room is untidy , my mther will tell me a off .   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
 My brother is a student . He is in Number One midle school . He is a good student . He’s hobby is play basketball and play computer game . On Saturday , we will play baketball in the moring . He dose well in sport , such as ping-pang ball , swimming and so on . He is a basketball fan , And he is very tall .  
     I am a student , too . Both of my parents love me very much . Though they love me , they are always strict with me . They often ask me to work hard . I lots of interests . They always support me in these . I like give a performance , so theytake me to a race . I like English , so they helped me to find a good teather . They hope I can be suessful one day .  
     This is my family . I like this warm and quiet family . We feelvery happy when we are together .  

 
 
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