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My Day


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  这是一次单元考试的英语作文,可能写得不好,大家就凑合着看嘛.如果有什么错,或者还需改正的地方,拜托一定要提出来,谢谢啦~
 My name is Liang Jieying.I am a school girl. I get up at 6:00. Then at 6:30, I eat breakfast. After breakfast, I go to school at 7:10. Class begins at 8:00. At 12:30,I eat lunch .In the afternoon, I go home at 16:30. From 16:30 to 17:30, I watch TV, the I do homework. I read books for about two hours, because I very like read books. At 21:10, I go to bed.  
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