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Spring comes


梦想王国之野蛮≌艳城堡 英语忠实者
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  虽然现在不是春天,但也是偶辛苦写的,老师修改过的.希望大家不要随意扣分呀!~~
 Spring comes,some people can do what they want to do.Look at the lake,the ducks swim in there.ther are laughing.I know they are very happy.Look at the trees,begin to turn green.Lot of pepole is working hard.And everywhere are so warm.Look at the sky,swallow is flying.They are Freedom.A year moment lies in spring,and Spring is very beautiful.So, I love Spring very much.How about you?  

 
 
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