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Harry Potter


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  (好象语法有挺多错误的~望大家指出,其实这篇文章早就想写的,只是一直有些话不会用英语表达,迟迟没有写.记得好象是桥桥给我提的建议,让我写哈利的哈~呵呵~谢谢桥及一些其他的朋友,不一一指出了^-^)
    Harry Potter is my favorite movie. Last week, my friends and I went to see the movie. It’s a movie about Harry and his wonderful experiences. Harry is young , but he is very brave. He can fight with Lord Voldemort (伏地魔). I am proud of his braver. He is one of  the most fantastic persons.  
    Harry Potter has two good friends ,they are Ron Weasley (罗恩韦斯莱) and  Hermione Granger (赫敏格兰杰). They are close friends. Harry has no parents , his parents were killed by Lord Voldemort. His parents were very great. They have been dead to protect young Harry. He lives in his aunt’s home, they are not friendly to Harry .  The Weasleys like Harry very much. They often invent Harry to their home to spend his holidays.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
    I like Harry Potter very much because I yeam magic, it's so brilliant.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
     
    (好象语法有挺多错误的~望大家指出,其实这篇文章早就想写的,只是一直有些话不会用英语表达,迟迟没有写.记得好象是桥桥给我提的建议,让我写哈利的哈~呵呵~谢谢桥及一些其他的朋友,不一一指出了^-^)  
 
 

 
 
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