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I have a picnic with my friends


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  The birds are singing in the branches. The butterfly dances in the air. Blue sky, green grass. Don't mention how beautiful.
  I have a picnic with my friends  
  My name is LouXinyi. I have a good friend, her name is ZhaoJunsha. She is quiet and pretty girl. She is 13 years old, but I’m only 12 years old. She is older than me, and heavier than me. She likes reading book and playing badminton. This is just my hobby. So we are good frind.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  In the last Sunday, we had played together. We are a big picnic in the forest. This is a very beautiful forest, Filled with a lot of novelty. The birds are singing in the branches. The butterfly dances in the air. Blue sky, green grass. Don't mention how beautiful. We ate, the side to drew down the beautiful scene. That day, I play with my good friends can be happy!  
  《我的名字叫楼鑫亿。我有一个好朋友,她的名字叫赵君莎。她是一个安静又漂亮的女孩。她是13岁,但是我只有12岁。她比我大,还比我重。她喜欢看书和打羽毛球。刚好这也是我的爱好。所以说我们是好朋友。  
  在上个星期天,我们还一起玩过呢。我们在一个很大的森林里举行野餐。这是一个非常漂亮的森林,里面有许多新奇的东西。鸟儿在枝头歌唱,蝴蝶在空中舞蹈。蓝天,绿草别提有多美丽了。我们一边吃,一边把这美丽的景色给画了下来。在那一天,我和我的朋友玩的可开心了!》
 
 
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