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My birthday


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  Because today there willbe many peopie to celebrate my birthday.Because today there will be but give me many gives.I sure eat a very big cake.Because today is my birthday
Hello.Today is August 21st.Today is my birthday.I get up very.Because today there willbe many peopie to celebrate my birthday.Because today there will be but give me many gives.I sure eat a very big cake.Because today is my birthday.My mom and dad and I went to the nature park.My sister is a family also went to the nature park with my brother.I am very happy.  
I love my birthday very much.                                                                                 四年级 赵葳     
 
 
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