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Travel in the Xiamen


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  Surely she’ll have a better future.
  Travel in the Xiamen  
 Today ts Firday,I and my family are going to Xiamen.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
 At the morning.My family are going to:Hu li shan emplacement.In the emplacement gun is very big.Gun tube is very long.It’s look very grand.Do you like this?   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
 At the afternoon,We’er going to “Nan pu tuo si”。It’s very big.In the ternple,it has many pigeon and people.You like pigeon,isn’t it?So you like them,but they annoying you.Why?Because you’er very bigger.(Ha-ha)  
 Xiamen is a beautiful city .She welcom all people come here.Surely she’ll have a better future.   
  

 
 
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