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A Happy Day


四村小学606 冰泉茹雪

  What a great day!
  Today I was very happy.  
  I want to the park with my parents.I met my firend,Ben.We played gamestogether.It was fun.And then we went to a fast food restaurant.The food was very nice.I ate a hambergerand,a slice of pizza.idrank a glass of juice,too.It was yumming.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  On the afternoon,we visited the museum.It was interesting.I learned a lot about history.I bought some books from the Gift Shop.After that,we waited a log times for No.2 bus.It was boring.At last,we went home.We were tired,but happy.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  What a great day!

 
 
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