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My bedroom


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  这就是我的卧室,怎么样?还不错吧。我想应该还有不足,请大家帮忙指出吧。如果提的对,会有我的奖励的呦!
This is my bedroom. My bedroom is not very big, but it's very beautiful. The wall is white. There is a telephone is on the wall. The phone is light blue. A brow desk is near a photo. The desk is in front of the yellow door. There is a chair is under the desk. There are something on the desk. A lamp is on the desk. Some books and a clock is on the desk, too. There is a bed beside the desk. There is a yellow and blue sheet on the bed. And a red pillow, a pink quilt is on the bed,too.Some flowers are beside the window. It’s very fragrant. There is a curtain is in front of the window.It’s pink,too. My bedroom is very clean. Do you think so? My bedroom is very comfortable. I love it very much. And you?  

 
 
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