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  With clothesa, the new are best; with friends ,the old are best. It's only a English proverb. But I believe it's the God keep in the human world's truch I have two friend one li. is my classmate in primary school. Another zhu. is my classmate in now. I began say from the Zhu. He is mine first friend in instutions of higher learning. him too. but Ichange an unfavourable or a critica view of he by one thing that he hate for me in older to agirl. Another the li we can'tto see have 6 years ,but he help me to find my youny sitter in yeastday night.  
  so I believe it is right that with clothes, the new are best; with friends the old are best.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn

 
 
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