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Taking Care of the Cat(修改稿)


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  这篇作文经过我们英语刘老师一字一句精心修改的。我对我们的老师表示最衷心的感谢。
  Writen by Wang Hanzhi  
  I played with my best friend Yuki in our yard this afternoon. We played here and there. The sun watched us as we were playing. It seemed it didn’t want to go down. Until it was so tired, it decided to go down slowly.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  We played with the bottles. Then a cat suddenly caught our eyes.  
  “Look!” cried Yuki. “There’s a cat.”  
  “Come on! Let’s go and see it!” I said it with a low voice.  
  Then I pulled Yuki a little and ran slowly to it.  
  At that time, an aunt was feeding the cat with the sausage. It was eating up the sausage very quickly. Yuki and I bend down to pet it.  
  The colors of the cat are yellow, white and black. It wagged its tail slowly.  
  This cat didn’t belong to the aunt. It’s a wild cat. So she left us with the cat.  
  Then we gave it some water. But it didn’t want to drink it. It seemed the cat was still hungry. So Yuki let me go up to her house to get some sausages.  
  At first I didn’t want to go, so I just stayed there staring at the cat. Yuki said to me, “Come on!” So, at last, I agreed.  
  I stepped on the stairs quickly. In order to have more time to play, I got on the stairs two by two. I rang the doorbell. Yuki’s grandma opened the door. I told her about the cat. Then she gave me some pieces of meat. I took then and went down the stairs as fast as my legs can carry me.  
  I ran to Yuki quickly, and gave the meat to her.  
  “Meaw! Meaw!” went the cat. I guessed it’s still hungry.  
  The cat could not wait for the meat to come. It stood up on both back legs and hopped to it.  
  Then Yuki gave the meat to the cat. It ate it up very quickly. When the cat finished the meat, it went to a car, and lay under it. We could hear it snoring.  
  “Maybe it’s sleeping.” I said to Yuki.  
  “It’s a big male cat.” One grandpa in the yard told us.  
  “But will he be all right when the car drive away tomorrow morning?” asked Yuki.  
  “Don’t worry. It will be fine.” said the grandpa. “It will whoosh away as a flash.”  
  “Ok, the cat is full. Let’s go back home.” I said to Yuki.  
  Then we walked home happily when the sun was going down quietly.
 
 
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