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We’re going to have a picnic(课文改写)


西安西一路小学一年级 含芝

  One day, Simon’s mum, Daming and Simon are going to a park.They are going to have a picnic.
  
   
  One day, Simon’s mum, Daming and Simon are going to a park.They are going to have a picnic.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  In the park, it’s very sunny. Simon asks his mum: “When are we going to eat, Mum?” His Mum answer: “At half past twelve.”   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  Simon asks again: “And what time is it now?”  
  His Mum answer: “It’s only half past eleven.First we’re going to walk around the lake and see the swans.Then we’re going to eat.”  
  This time Daming sees there are black clouds in the sky, said: “Look.It’s going to rain soon.”  
  “No, it isn’t.” Simon’s mum said. “It’s a beautiful day.Let’s go.”  
  But it’s time for picnic.It’s raining!Simon shouted: “Oh, no!It’s raining now!”  
  Simon’s Mum said: “Let’s go under the tree.It’s dry there!  
  The swans are go up the lake, Daming look at this matter, he’s angry: “Look at the swans.What are they going to do?”  
  Simon said: “Naughty swans.They’re going to eat our sandwiches!”Because their picnic are wet.The swans likes them.  
 
 
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