It's a sunny day , my sisters my brother and l are out of my house to play . There are hius and a tree beside my house . l'm flying a kite on the thehills. The kite is flying very hight. My younger sister is climbing the tree. And my older sister and my brother are playing hide—cand—seek around the house. We are howing a good time. It's happy day for us.
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