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  The shining eyes sparkling brightly on me. The brightly eye moving swiftly out of the night city.
  The shining eyes sparkling brightly on me.  
  The brightly eye moving swiftly out of the night city.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  He was coughing and staring at the dark sky.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  She was staring at the rushing fire.  
  The star was whispering the secret, the wind were singing and the cloud were dancing.  
  The metal finger was pointing the dark sky.  
  The sky was like a sea, splashing and playing.  
  The sky just like a hungry dog trying to eat the sleepy moon.  
  The people moving around like little ant.  
  The people were rushing like a hungry dog.  
  He make a beautiful sound to the great city, oh what a sound.  
  She look like a women wear a silver dress.  
  He rushing like a hurry leopard chasing a food in his eyes.

 
 
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