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My favorite Place in the World


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  My favorite place in the world is Xincheng Square in Xi’an, China. There is a beautiful view. There are many trees. The trees are tall and big.
    
  My favorite place in the world is Xincheng Square in Xi’an, China. There is a beautiful view. There are many trees. The trees are tall and big. They have decorations this time of year. When Spring Festival is nearly here! There are lanterns. If you come to the Xincheng Square at night. You will saw that the lights on the trees are shining. So even through is dark outside. But Xincheng Square is bright.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  Next I will say about the fountains. The fountains began to spray water in the afternoon. And it sprays water all the way to night. When night came. You can see light under the fountains. And when soft wind blows. The water sprays everywhere. Some of the water splat to our faces! “Hey! Water!”  
  Next I will say about the children. Children love to play at Xincheng Square when they are on holiday. Some of the younger children ride toy cars. But that’s a special kind of toy car. You can sit in it and drive it.  
  Some older children, like me, roller skate. Some of them went fast. Some of them went wobble and fell. Some of them have to hold their parents hands because they are afraid of falling down.  
  Some grown-up boys skateboard. They can skateboard so well that they can jump up in the air and the skateboard was just like…well, sticking on their feet. And when they landed. They don’t fall. “How did they do that?” I asked myself.  
  But the one who gave us the most of the happiness was the doves. Many children feed them with corn. But most of them also want to catch them. Can you make a sound like a dove? The dove sound is like gu gu, gu gu, gu gu.  
  I usually roller skate in the afternoon at Xincheng Square this winter holiay. And I spend some good afternoon there.
 
 
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