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Come on


光明小学五年二班 童年天真

  Friends, come on!
  "My friends, come on! " The papers hair down, I whispered to the lost friend. Cheer up! Come on! She still ignore me.  
  " Don't lose, the next effort trying! Must be able to test well! " " … … But … … This fraction, parents will say my classmates would laugh at me! " Then she cried, " don't worry, 91 points, do not know how many times I have, you only 0.5 will be in the top 5, you ' 95. ' ' team 95 ' should have a rest. " I joke with friends comfort. " I want to go to,, I can not be discouraged, not afraid of! " Wipe away tears, friends say. Come on. We clap laughs.
 
 
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