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My family


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  Hello! Nice to meet My name is wangcheng I have a big family. There are five people in my family.Look! This is my mother she is 39 years old She is beautiful She works in a buildingbooks store She works very long hours She often very tired after work. That is my father .He likes playing basketball He often play basketball with his friend He usually go to a movie on wekkend He likes action movies and I like action movies too .Oh! look those my grandparents They usually get up early They often play sports in the morning  
 This is my family .I love my family very much

 
 
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