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我最喜爱的明星(英文版)


清水轩洛阳阁 凌伊儿

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My favourite star  
The world has many people, they do something and do it well. They are fantastic! They all are star. It ‘s the same name of them.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
I really admire them. And my favourite star is Bill Gates. He is very rich and he change the world. My father has some books about him. It talks about how can him rich. But most importantly, he is a kind man. He and his wife help a lot of people. He doesn’t want to leave the money in the bank or for his family. He gives a lot of money for the poor or someone need money. He is friendly to other people. So someone maybe scold him but he doesn’t angry with them.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
I’d like to be a person like him, not friendless or malicious.It’s a good charter, so I can happy everyday and make other people happy. Oh of course, I would like to be helpful, too!  
Bill Gates is really a good person. We can study a lot of things of him.  

 
 
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