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My family


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  He is working in the bank of China.
   Hello,my name is Liang Mengdi.I have a good family.There are six people in my family.They are my father ,my mother ,my grandfather ,my mother ,my sister and I.  
   My father is forty-two years old.He likes surfing ,fishing and sleepping. He is working works in the bank of China.My mother is thirty-nine years old.She is a very good home cooking.She plays sports every day.My grandfather is sixty-six years old. He is a very good at watering the flowers.My grandmother is sixty-two years old.She is a Movie fans. Her grandfather was like and cycling.(这句话没弄明白)My sister is eighteen years od.She likes doing housework.She is a High school students.I'm thirteen years old.I like reading books,playing basketball and playing computer.I am a student.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
   This is my family.It is good family.What about you.

 
 
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整体上没有语法错误,但是可看出小作者的英语词汇不丰富,以后要多多记住一些词组,这样会让你作文增色不少~~---- By 小荷 2009-10-26 20:28:05

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