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Welcome to my home


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  Hi,my name is WangFuoHao, I am from China.Welcome to my home,Let’go have a look.  
  This is living room,There is a TV ,a fridge ,a sofa ,a phone ,a fan and a window.my mother and father was watching TV.living room Beside it is a kitchen,my grandma is cooking,she's cooking is very delicious.Continue to go up,It is my badroom.my bedroom is big,my dog is sleeping on my bed .There is a table, a chair, a bookshelf, a bathroom, a bed and YiTaiTai lamp.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  This is my home, my sweet home.
 
 
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