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Only drink clean water(课文改写)


西安西一路小学一年级 含芝

  One day, Simon’s mum with Daming and Simon went to a park.Simon’s mum bring a basket of fruit.Daming said to Simon’s mum:“This is a beautiful park, Aunt.”
   
One day, Simon’s mum with Daming and Simon went to a park.Simon’s mum bring a basket of fruit.Daming said to Simon’s mum: “This is a beautiful park, Aunt.”   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
His Aunt said: “Yes, we come here often.”   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
This time.His cousin Simon said: “Mum.Can we have our picnic now?I’m hungry.”  
Daming said, too: “And I’m thirsty.”  
Simon’s mum said: “Yes, of course. Here are your sandwichs.”  
Simon and Daming said: “Thank you.”  
But Simon’s mum look at the basket, said: “Oh no!I didn’t bring any drinks!I forgot!”  
Simon and Daming shouted: “Oh no!”  
Then Daming’s cousin Simon see a very big stone bowl has lot  
of water, said: “Don’t worry, Mum.We can drink water here.”  
Simon’s mum said: “Only drink clean water.”  
Simon careful look the water again.Said to his mum: “This water is very clean!”  
Daming said, too: “And good.”  
“It’s fun to drink this way!”Simon said.  
Simon and Daming are laughing: “Ha, ha, ha.”And then they are having their picnic.  
 
 
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