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Myself『我自己』╰☆


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  Ps:这是一篇英语介绍,较简单,额...可能有些语法错误,不过,希望大家给我指出来,让我改正.谢谢哒....
    Hello,class! My pen name is Lian Xiang. I'm thirteen. I have a round face, moreover, I have two big eyes. I am tall, but I am very tin. I ordinary-looking. I am kind and I am  helpful. I from Hebi, Do you know Hebi? It's in Henan Province. I am going to the elementary school.  
    I have a happy family. My mother in Bank of China work, She is very busy. My father in Government work, He is very busy, too. I love them very much. They love me very much, too.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn

 
 
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